Feedback Requested

Update: This draft paper is no longer available. I’ve submitted a revised edition to a journal for publication. If you would like a copy drop me an email and I’ll send you one. I thank all you you who read my draft and offered suggestions.
I’m looking for feedback on a working draft of my paper on the Tiryns Cuneiform Inscription. So, if you have an abnormal interest in this inscription and some experience with Ugaritic and Akkadian writing systems, please follow the links. Any comments will be appreciated. I plan to take this draft down in a week or so and submit some version of the paper to a journal for more traditional publication. I’m still working to make the graphics uniform and in a couple of cases more accurate.